The first day of school. A beautiful girl. My heart was gone in a flash—straight into her hands. I told myself I wouldn't be in this place. The world seems much brighter.
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Ivory
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we'll you must see the world has obsticals but, if you look close enough you,ll find that there is always a hidden treasure in the nightmare .A simple thing that's brightens it ever so lightly.So now that you found the tresure is it more worth it to walk through the nightmare?
It's good that you have enough self-control to know that you shouldn't just rush into things along the lines of "love". Now you have time to scope the scene and not focus on just one girl. I like how you said the world is a much brighter place it shows that your optimistic. Good job.
Andrew, I know exactly what you mean! When you find someone that just makes the colors seem brighter, and the music a little louder! I hate how you don't want to like them SO much, but, we're only human! Just don't get so attached that she can crush your heart. :) you're mature enough to know the difference, so I would just say "I wish you the best of luck!"
Re: thanks for the reply on my memoir. I really appreciate it. The part I was getting at when I said, " The world seems brighter," was that my world sucks, but at some point in depressed lives. those depressed lives will find something to look forward to. Some times ( when love hits you in the face and you let it go) it might be a really cold day.
4 comments:
we'll you must see the world has obsticals but, if you look close enough you,ll find that there is always a hidden treasure in the nightmare .A simple thing that's brightens it ever so lightly.So now that you found the tresure is it more worth it to walk through the nightmare?
It's good that you have enough self-control to know that you shouldn't just rush into things along the lines of "love". Now you have time to scope the scene and not focus on just one girl. I like how you said the world is a much brighter place it shows that your optimistic. Good job.
Andrew,
I know exactly what you mean! When you find someone that just makes the colors seem brighter, and the music a little louder! I hate how you don't want to like them SO much, but, we're only human! Just don't get so attached that she can crush your heart. :) you're mature enough to know the difference, so I would just say "I wish you the best of luck!"
Re: thanks for the reply on my memoir. I really appreciate it. The part I was getting at when I said, " The world seems brighter," was that my world sucks, but at some point in depressed lives. those depressed lives will find something to look forward to. Some times ( when love hits you in the face and you let it go) it might be a really cold day.
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