I stood in the road.that thing staring at me. Tears in my eyes —should of slept. Anger welding inside me. No more running .Walking hands in fist I walked through it. Never will I belittle fear.
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Rylee
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I like this one because it has a mystery to it. What were you afraid of? It also has a good message. Never belittle fear.
This twitter post makes me real curious as to the story behind it, maybe I'm just not getting it and it's plain as day. But it is really thought intriguing. Maybe you could let me know the story behind this on my twitter blogs, and/or 6 word memoir blog?. It would be nice to be enlightened, about this.
What interests me is that whatever the thing is that's in your path, most people, including some really fearless people. some times it is so fearful that most people go crazy and have to leave it's presence. Others avoid it, but it finds them. The last group of people fight through it some don't win and others win!
This is defiantly one of those things that happens to bypass most.It makes no seance but later in class I will be able to write down the full story.Hopefully it will ease your curiosity.To all whom can see the sudden obliteration of hidden meaning.
The thing I like with reference to is that you said that you will never belittle fear and that is an absolute fact. If you don't fear anything then that means your lying or you fear fear itself. Other than that I like how you used anger as if it's a living thing. I really liked what you wrote and I hope you keep writing.
I absolutely love this story, this storyline is courageous enough, stands up to bullies and is more likely to be a anime movie produced in Japan or like wise anywhere.
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I like this one because it has a mystery to it. What were you afraid of? It also has a good message. Never belittle fear.
This twitter post makes me real curious as to the story behind it, maybe I'm just not getting it and it's plain as day. But it is really thought intriguing. Maybe you could let me know the story behind this on my twitter blogs, and/or 6 word memoir blog?. It would be nice to be enlightened, about this.
What interests me is that whatever the thing is that's in your path, most people, including some really fearless people. some times it is so fearful that most people go crazy and have to leave it's presence. Others avoid it, but it finds them. The last group of people fight through it some don't win and others win!
This is defiantly one of those things that happens to bypass most.It makes no seance but later in class I will be able to write down the full story.Hopefully it will ease your curiosity.To all whom can see the sudden obliteration of hidden meaning.
Honestly this made me think of Edgar Allen Poe. It's so dark. I like that it keeps you guessing. The wording makes my brain flip.
The thing I like with reference to is that you said that you will never belittle fear and that is an absolute fact. If you don't fear anything then that means your lying or you fear fear itself. Other than that I like how you used anger as if it's a living thing. I really liked what you wrote and I hope you keep writing.
I absolutely love this story, this storyline is courageous enough, stands up to bullies and is more likely to be a anime movie produced in Japan or like wise anywhere.
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