Tuesday, October 28, 2014

If I Could Change the World


If I could change this world I would take three simple steps.I,d get rid of hate,forgetfulness ,and weakness. these things may sound simple and strange but they have their reasons to be removed.A forgotten list that I hope some people understand.

First of all I,d more than love to remove hate. Something that I believe is to strong of a word of felling to be a part of this simple society. people use it to often to understand that you can't really hate Something or someone,without the Thought that it's most unruly nightmares and pains would come to life. Like saying I hate this person and would not think twice if he/she were to watch their family be raped and Murdered. I do know there is few people who do understand this. for they may have truly hated someone to the point. That one day something horrible truly did happen, and upon a bet I think they felt remorse.Posable even blamed them self for what happened to them.That is truly one of the worst pains you can feel.To know you wished upon someone Something that not even yourself could bear to happen to you or one of your loved one. Sometimes we forget that they have people who love them or would cry over a thing that bad were to happen. so to a far fetched extent hating someone hurts many innocent, happy people around them.

second I would purge the world of forgetfulness. People do deserve to forget, but running away from something like that never solves the problem. The skeletons you hide in the closet only await for something  to release them .So they can relentlessly torture You until you can lock them away again. Then a more simple thing that I think people deserve is to remember fully of the good things as the shadowed faces tend to cover so all you ever see is the bad in the memories you cherish. then sometimes you may just stop at the store and forget what was on your list.So you sit there for hours until your mind sorts threw the Mistreated data inside your head. Wouldn't it be nice to always be able to remember what has been forgotten. Be it only the lyrics to the song or a day the changed you internally forever. In someway I see people as wanting to know Thea's internal pages of their diaries.

finally I wish to trash  our hardest things to overcome.Our weaknesses. What if everyman was almost invincible  and the only thing that could end him was death.That we could walk about this world without a fear. Our heads held high because today they were always going to be a little better than yesterday. Instead of gradually getting weaker Every second. What if all we could do was grow and get smarter by the second?If there was no weakness maybe there be no war,maybe we could live together in simple harmony. So when we looked at our fellow man all we saw was what w good in their world.Not to Sit a niddy pick what they had done wrong their weaknesses.For once us all as humans could simple be just that human.

Thea's are some things I would change in the world measly  to see if man would prosper or fall. sadly this is only wishful thinking, but everyday I will picture the world becoming like this.Because no matter whom of what you are I believe everyone deserves to live the happiest life. Even that is a bit narcissistic for me to say. for I have hated, I have forgotten, and most of all I have Many weaknesses. We all do but it doesn't mean You yourself isn't perfect or simple beautiful in your own little ways. so live you life hold your head high. for there is always someone in this world who will love you even if you don't see or hear it.



                                          That person is you.

10 comments:

Aspen said...

Ivory,
I love the genuinely of this paper. I like your reasoning for all of your aspects you'd get rid of. However I think that weaknesses are part of being human, in this life at least :) I think we have them to learn how to overcome them so we are ready for the next. But I also think that you're right: no weaknesses could mean no war of fighting because we could get rid of our pride and greed and anger. Ah! You're so deep In Thought, I love it!

Alex said...

I can feel the emotion that comes from this passage, makes me feel depressed and a little bit furious for those who are left behind.

Michael said...

I think that hate is a good thing toget rid of. But I know, through my own experiences that weaknesses make us stronger. This helps us so we can make our weaknesses into our greatest strengths.

Lyndee said...

I would have to agree with the hate because I don't like the word hate because all my friends said they "hated" my mom and it would make me cry but then I realized why they said that. It was because of how she treated me.

Kylie said...

I feel like you put a lot into writing this paper. i feel like you did a wonderful job!

Lyndee said...

Some people would say that to remove hate would start within one' own self. To start to remove hate would be to replace it with the exact opposite, forgiveness.

Jordan said...

I agree on the forgetfulness. I do have my share of putting it off cause I don't want to do it. That's mainly why I'm here today. I put off my fines and I payed the price.

Lyndee said...

Some people would say that in order to get rid of hate it would have to start within one's self. They also say that in order to get rid of hate it would need to be replaced wit forgiveness, especially for those who have wronged you in the past. Hard though it may be- it's not impossible.

Lyndee said...

By the way, in the general populace's and my own humble opinion, in order to get rid of hate, and replace it with forgiveness, would be to realize that every individual makes mistakes, and deserves a second chance—
Maybe even those who have in the past wronged you.

Lyndee said...

By the way, in the general populace's and my own humble opinion, in order to get rid of hate, and replace it with forgiveness, would be to realize that every individual makes mistakes, and deserves a second chance—
Maybe even those who have in the past wronged you.